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2016-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher, Good morning! Today, we talked about alcohol and I am going to make sentences regarding it. 1. I am not fond of drinking alcohol. 2. I know one person who is alcoholic. 3. When I drink alcohol, I usually have a terrible hangover. 4. He is a heavy drinker. 5. Beer's strength is not that high. 6. I have drunk Chinese alcohol once and as soon as I drank it I fainted. 7. As I heard, women are not good at eliminating the alcohol from the blood in comparison to men. 8. Drinking a bowl of Bean Sprouts Soup is helpful for relieving a hangover. 9. How much do you usually drink? 10. He passed out drunk in the bar. That is all for today and see tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^ Yes, we talked about drinking alcohol and I have also checked your sentences at the bottom part. I hope that even though you are not a drinker, you will use the sentences properly during a conversation. Always take care of yourself!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct Good morning! >> Correct Today, we talked about alcohol and I am going to make sentences regarding it. >> Correct 1. I am not fond of drinking alcohol. >> Correct 2. I know one person who is alcoholic. >> Correct 3. When I drink alcohol, I usually have a terrible hangover. >> Correct 4. He is a heavy drinker. >> Correct 5. Beer\'s strength is not that high. >> Beer\'s strength is not that strong.6. I have drunk Chinese alcohol once and as soon as I drank it I fainted. >> Correct 7. As I heard, women are not good at eliminating the alcohol from the blood in comparison to men. >> Correct 8. Drinking a bowl of Bean Sprouts Soup is helpful for relieving a hangover. >> Correct 9. How much do you usually drink? >> Correct 10. He passed out drunk in the bar. >> Correct That is all for today and see tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct

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