Composition

Dear Teacher, Good evening! Today, we talked about violence in school and the topic was a little heavy. When I was in my school days, my peers tended to have pure and mild personalities. However, young generation these days is more tough than we were so the scene of using violence is witnessed frequently. I feel sad that they are living under this kind of hard satiation. Anyway, I want to make some sentences regarding violence below. 1. We should not use violence even though we get angry. 2. Corporal punishment is banned in school. 3. A student in the U.S. held a gun on everybody in school. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! P.S.: I will try to recover from Thursday sickness in order not to affect our conversation tomorrow! ^^;; Have a nice day! ^^

Good morning, [이름]!^^ I believe you have a Wednesday sickness and I do have a Thursday sickness. I hope that you won\'t feel tired and it is ok to commit mistakes sometimes. We can learn from them as time passes by. I wish I could really apply it in my daily life, too. See you~~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct.Good evening! >> Correct.Today, we talked about violence in school and the topic was a little heavy. >> Correct.When I was in my school days, my peers tended to have pure and mild personalities. >> Correct.However, young generation these days is more tough than we were so the scene of using violence is witnessed frequently. >> However, the young generation these days is tougher than we were so the scene of using violence is witnessed frequently.I feel sad that they are living under this kind of hard satiation. >> I feel sad that they are living under this kind of hard situation.Anyway, I want to make some sentences regarding violence below. >> Correct.1. We should not use violence even though we get angry. >> Correct.2. Corporal punishment is banned in school. >> Corporal punishment is banned in schools. 3. A student in the U.S. held a gun on everybody in school. >> A student in the U.S. pointed a gun at everybody in school. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> Correct.P.S.: I will try to recover from Thursday sickness in order not to affect our conversation tomorrow! ^^;; >> Correct.Have a nice day! ^^ >> Correct.