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2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good afternoon, Teacher! Today, we just had a free talk and I found that you rated me level 5 for 'Pronunciation'. It is my first time to get this level so I felt good. Hehehe Anyway, I'd like to submit some sentences that I took a dictation. 1. Does your job include decision making? 2. You are carrying the burden of your customers. 3. I want to compare your face from before and now through a web cam. 4. I am planning to take a driver's licence test. 5. I think I am more forgetful these days. 6. I forget things that are not supposed to be forgotten. 7. Because of this forgetfulness, it is affecting my relationship with other people. 8. It is the first time in history. 9. I don't know where I put it. 10. It was more than 11:20. 11. What are the instances that you forget things? 12. I still keep on hurting her. 13. I am preoccupied with something. 14. This is a given situation. 15. I felt apologized to him. 16. Why do you always forget that I don't want to be blamed? 17. He doesn't want to be late for an appointment. 18. In the beginning of our relationship, I used to blame him. See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear, [이름]!^^ Good thing you are doing your dictation religiously.^^ However, I don\'t have a recording so I think I will ask you to double check the other sentences that I corrected. If I had a mistake in the recording while we talked, I sincerely apologize for it may be a mistake on my part. See you later my dear!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good afternoon, Teacher! >> CorrectToday, we just had a free talk and I found that you rated me level 5 for \'Pronunciation\'. >> CorrectIt is my first time to get this level so I felt good. Hehehe >> CorrectAnyway, I\'d like to submit some sentences that I took a dictation. >> Anyway, I\'d like to submit some sentences that I took for dictation.1. Does your job include decision making? >> Correct2. You are carrying the burden of your customers. >> Correct3. I want to compare your face from before and now through a web cam. >> Correct4. I am planning to take a driver\'s licence test. >> Correct5. I think I am more forgetful these days. >> Correct6. I forget things that are not supposed to be forgotten. >> Correct7. Because of this forgetfulness, it is affecting my relationship with other people. >> Correct8. It is the first time in history. >> Correct9. I don\'t know where I put it. >> Correct10. It was more than 11:20. >> It was past 11:20. 11. What are the instances that you forget things? >> Correct12. I still keep on hurting her. >> Correct13. I am preoccupied with something. >> Correct14. This is a given situation. >> Correct 15. I felt apologized to him. >> I felt apologizing to him.16. Why do you always forget that I don\'t want to be blamed? >> Correct17. He doesn\'t want to be late for an appointment. >> Correct18. In the beginning of our relationship, I used to blame him. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct

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