Composition

Good afternoon, Teacher! I know that it is your time to leave work. Please help me correcting my sentences that I made below next Monday. Have a wonderful weekend! ^^** P.S.: I will practice the pronunciation more until I can distinguish between 'older' and 'order'. 1. Her face was grey with exhaustion. 2. I had to insist one thing to our Chinese coworkers. 3. I had to persuade a person to do that. 4. How would you make their mind open? 5. It is an abrupt one. 6. I don't doubt your skill but I doubt the decision making that they have. 7. They have this kind of ego. 8. You have been with them for quite some time. 9. Are they mostly risk takers? 10. You have already done your part and this is another level. 11. I don't question your ability. 12. He should support your idea for them to be convinced more. 13. Kick him out of your office! 14. Are you trying to defend him now? 15. The dead line is due next Friday. 16. You have shown them your strategic plan. 17. Will there be any difference? 18. Will there be a change from what you did before? 19. Would it still be the same?

Hello, [이름]!^^ Here are the corrections that we have for your sentences. Even though I don\'t put the reasons why, still do not hesitate to ask questions if you have.^^ How was your weekend? Let\'s talk more about it later on when we meet!^^ See you then~~~Teacher Erine~~ Good afternoon, Teacher! >> CorrectI know that it is your time to leave work. >> CorrectPlease help me correcting my sentences that I made below next Monday. >> Please help me correct my sentences that I made below next Monday.Have a wonderful weekend! ^^** >> CorrectP.S.: I will practice the pronunciation more until I can distinguish between \'older\' and \'order\'. >> P.S. I will practice my pronunciation more until I can distinguish between \'older\' and \'order\'. 1. Her face was grey with exhaustion. >> Correct2. I had to insist one thing to our Chinese coworkers. >> Correct3. I had to persuade a person to do that. >> Correct4. How would you make their mind open? >> Correct5. It is an abrupt one. >> Correct 6. I don\'t doubt your skill but I doubt the decision making that they have. >> Correct7. They have this kind of ego. >> Correct8. You have been with them for quite some time. >> Correct9. Are they mostly risk takers? >> Correct10. You have already done your part and this is another level. >> Correct11. I don\'t question your ability. >> Correct12. He should support your idea for them to be convinced more. >> Correct13. Kick him out of your office! >> Correct14. Are you trying to defend him now? >> Correct15. The dead line is due next Friday. >> The deadline is due next Friday.16. You have shown them your strategic plan. >> Correct17. Will there be any difference? >> Correct18. Will there be a change from what you did before? >> Correct19. Would it still be the same? >> Correct