Composition

Dear Teacher, Good afternoon! It is Monday! Time goes very fast. It's almost the end of the month. I am a little bit afraid of getting older. Hahaha! Anyway, please help me correct what I submitted below. Have a nice day! ^^** 1. As much as possible, I don't want to buy them toys. 2. I was irritated. 3. I took some uncooked rice from my hometown. 4. Rice here is not as good as what we have there in my hometown. 5. It will turn out like a jam. 6. Talking burns a lot of calories. 7. When we lack sleep, metabolism slows down. 8. What are you trying to insinuate? 9. I will take it as a positive comment. 10. Some of my friends are trying to commend on one picture on Facebook. 11. It was the time when I went to Boracay. 12. It is really frustrating. 13. My weight is the same as before. 14. I don't have the equipment or device that I can measure my blood pressure. 15. It is said that we catch two rabbits at the same time.(Is it an English saying?)

Hello, my dear [이름]!^^ There were only few sentences that I corrected so I hope you can find time to check on them. If you have questions, feel free to ask them when we meet again tomorrow. Have a wonderful Monday!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> CorrectGood afternoon! >> CorrectIt is Monday! >> Correct Time goes very fast. >> CorrectIt\'s almost the end of the month. >> CorrectI am a little bit afraid of getting older. Hahaha! >> CorrectAnyway, please help me correct what I submitted below. >> CorrectHave a nice day! ^^** >> Correct1. As much as possible, I don\'t want to buy them toys. >> Correct2. I was irritated. >> Correct3. I took some uncooked rice from my hometown. >> Correct4. Rice here is not as good as what we have there in my hometown. >> Correct5. It will turn out like a jam. >> Correct6. Talking burns a lot of calories. >> Correct7. When we lack sleep, metabolism slows down. >> When we lack sleep, our metabolism slows down.8. What are you trying to insinuate? >> Correct9. I will take it as a positive comment. >> Correct10. Some of my friends are trying to commend on one picture on Facebook. >> Correct11. It was the time when I went to Boracay. >> Correct12. It is really frustrating. >> Correct13. My weight is the same as before. >> My weight is not as the same as before. 14. I don\'t have the equipment or device that I can measure my blood pressure. >> I don\'t have the equipment or device that I can use to measure my blood pressure.15. It is said that we catch two rabbits at the same time.(Is it an English saying?) >> It is said that we can\'t catch two rabbits at the same time. (It isn\'t. But because Koreans always try to use it, it is now understood in English as a Konglish expression.)