Composition

Dear Teacher, Good morning! Here in Korea, it is cloudy but it is warm today. Maybe, this horrible cold weather will be gone in a very short time. I am just worried if the weather suddenly will turn into summer. Hehehe! Anyway, I'd like to submit my composition below. Please help me correct what I wrote. See you!^^** -You only got 5 classes left. -During my entire stay here, this is my first time to know about it. -Our young generation's personality is mild and pure. -They might feel left behind. -They don't want their children to be left behind. -They don't want their children to be outcasted by other children. (Can the word of 'outcast' be used as a verb?) -Would you do the same? -Would you also let your kid have those kinds of gadget? -What would be the first thing that you will provide? -That is an old school saying. -There is nothing to convince me to have a baby. -You are just preventing having a child for that child not to have a burden.

Hello, [이름]!^^ I think your dictation skills are getting better. You are getting all the sentences correctly!^^ Keep up the good work!^^ I\'ll see you again tomorrow and let\'s continue our topic that we didn\'t finish today. See you then!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct. Good morning! >> Correct. Here in Korea, it is cloudy but it is warm today. >> Correct. Maybe, this horrible cold weather will be gone in a very short time. >> Correct. I am just worried if the weather suddenly will turn into summer. Hehehe! >> Correct. (Why are you worried then?)Anyway, I\'d like to submit my composition below. >> Correct. Please help me correct what I wrote. >> Correct. See you!^^** >> Correct.  -You only got 5 classes left. >> Correct. -During my entire stay here, this is my first time to know about it. >> Correct. -Our young generation\'s personality is mild and pure. >> Correct. -They might feel left behind. >> Correct. -They don\'t want their children to be left behind.\\ >> Correct. -They don\'t want their children to be outcasted by other children. >> Correct. (Can the word of \'outcast\' be used as a verb?) >> Correct. (The word outcast is used as a noun and an adjective. The word outcaste can be a verb)-Would you do the same? >> Correct. -Would you also let your kid have those kinds of gadget? >> Correct. -What would be the first thing that you will provide? >> Correct. -That is an old school saying. >> Correct. -There is nothing to convince me to have a baby. >> Correct. -You are just preventing having a child for that child not to have a burden. >> Correct.