Composition

Dear Teacher, Good morning! I found that you were wearing a thin T-shirt in our class. Isn't the weather there cold these days? I think the weather there is also very changeable and it is the same here. Suddenly, it is negative 7 degrees Celsius here today. I am sick and tired of this cold.~~~~~ ㅠㅠ Anyway, please help me correct sentenced that I wrote below. See you! ^^** -Mobile phones are very accessible to this kind of violence. -Let's leave that one behind. -It is one way to touch their lives if you are really going to talk to them as heart to heart talking. -Everything that you say will really be put here. -It is more effective when you have this kind of sincere talking. -The U.N has already announced World War Three -ISIS is a group of Islamic people. -They are the ones who agreed to take down ISIS. -They are planning to launch a missile. -What kind of measure does your government do nowadays? -The ruling party is using this kind of news to threaten people. -They are going to show themselves as the hero. -Why don't you like the election itself? -Two parties are fighting with each other instead of having the same goals. -It would not be effective if the opposing party will still have this kind of conflicts. -What kind of campaign would you tell people to convince them to elect the party?

Good morning, [이름]!^^ Thank you for writing down the sentences that we have. Some of the sentences have alternative sentences but not all!^^ If you have further questions, let\'s talk about that one tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct. Good morning! >> Correct.I found that you were wearing a thin T-shirt in our class. >> Correct.Isn\'t the weather there cold these days? >> Correct. (Not really anymore. The temperature can be managed by my skin already.kkk)I think the weather there is also very changeable and it is the same here. >> Correct.Suddenly, it is negative 7 degrees Celsius here today. >> Correct.I am sick and tired of this cold.~~~~~ ㅠㅠ >> Correct.Anyway, please help me correct sentenced that I wrote below. >> Anyway, please help me correct my sentences that I wrote below. See you! ^^** >> Correct.-Mobile phones are very accessible to this kind of violence. >> Correct.-Let\'s leave that one behind. >> Correct.-It is one way to touch their lives if you are really going to talk to them as heart to heart talking. >> It is one way to touch their lives if you are really going to talk to them heart to heart / to have a heart to heart with them. -Everything that you say will really be put here. >> Correct.-It is more effective when you have this kind of sincere talking. >> It is more effective when you have this kind of sincere way of talking. -The U.N has already announced World War Three >> Correct.-ISIS is a group of Islamic people. >> Correct.-They are the ones who agreed to take down ISIS. >> Correct.-They are planning to launch a missile. >> Correct. -What kind of measure does your government do nowadays? >> Correct.-The ruling party is using this kind of news to threaten people. >> Correct.-They are going to show themselves as the hero. >> Correct.-Why don\'t you like the election itself? >> Correct.-Two parties are fighting with each other instead of having the same goals. >> Correct.-It would not be effective if the opposing party will still have this kind of conflicts. >> Correct.-What kind of campaign would you tell people to convince them to elect the party? >> Correct.