Composition

2016-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning Teacher! Please help me check those sentences that I took a dictation. Have a nice day! -Deep breathing exercises will help you feel relaxed. (You only told 'Deep breathing exercises' in our class so I tried to make a perfect sentence with the phrase.) -We also have our presidential as well as the other politicians elections this May. -We have this presidential candidates debate. -They have their own proposals. -Their characters are different from each other. -It is interesting to know what each presidential candidate would propose and contradict. -It is very unpredictable who is going to win the presidential election. -How about in your case? -It is to elect members of the National Assembly. -You can not say the party you voted after the election. -Could he or she be imprisoned?

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! I\'ve checked the sentences you put here. If there are some mistakes that I checked before or that I mentioned, please forgive me about them. Here are the corrections I made. Take care my dear! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning Teacher! >> CorrectPlease help me check those sentences that I took a dictation. >> Please help me check these sentences that I took during dictation.Have a nice day! >> Correct-Deep breathing exercises will help you feel relaxed. >> Correct(You only told \'Deep breathing exercises\' in our class so I tried to make a perfect sentence with the phrase.) >> Correct-We also have our presidential as well as the other politicians elections this May. >> Correct-We have this presidential candidates debate. >> We have this presidential candidates\' debate. -They have their own proposals. >> Correct-Their characters are different from each other. >> Correct-It is interesting to know what each presidential candidate would propose and contradict. >> Correct-It is very unpredictable who is going to win the presidential election. >> Correct-How about in your case? >> Correct-It is to elect members of the National Assembly. >> It is the time to elect members of the National Assembly. -You can not say the party you voted after the election. >> Correct-Could he or she be imprisoned? >> Correct

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