Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning Teacher!
Please help me check those sentences that I took a dictation.
Have a nice day!
-Deep breathing exercises will help you feel relaxed.
(You only told 'Deep breathing exercises' in our class so I tried to make a perfect sentence with the phrase.)
-We also have our presidential as well as the other politicians elections this May.
-We have this presidential candidates debate.
-They have their own proposals.
-Their characters are different from each other.
-It is interesting to know what each presidential candidate would propose and contradict.
-It is very unpredictable who is going to win the presidential election.
-How about in your case?
-It is to elect members of the National Assembly.
-You can not say the party you voted after the election.
-Could he or she be imprisoned?
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I\'ve checked the sentences you put here.
If there are some mistakes that I checked before or that I mentioned,
please forgive me about them. Here are the corrections I made.
Take care my dear!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning Teacher!
>> CorrectPlease help me check those sentences that I took a dictation.
>> Please help me check these sentences that I took during dictation.Have a nice day!
>> Correct-Deep breathing exercises will help you feel relaxed.
>> Correct(You only told \'Deep breathing exercises\' in our class so I tried to make a perfect sentence with the phrase.)
>> Correct-We also have our presidential as well as the other politicians elections this May.
>> Correct-We have this presidential candidates debate.
>> We have this presidential candidates\' debate. -They have their own proposals.
>> Correct-Their characters are different from each other.
>> Correct-It is interesting to know what each presidential candidate would propose and contradict.
>> Correct-It is very unpredictable who is going to win the presidential election.
>> Correct-How about in your case?
>> Correct-It is to elect members of the National Assembly.
>> It is the time to elect members of the National Assembly. -You can not say the party you voted after the election.
>> Correct-Could he or she be imprisoned?
>> Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.