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2016-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Dear Teacher, Good morning! Time goes very fast! It is the end of February! Wow! Let's greet new month with a happy heart! Have a great weekend and see you on Monday! ^^** *Reviewing our class I am going to go a lonesome place to practice driving a car. You mean to say that you want to go to isolated places? You have several ways to pass the exam. We are going to be accompanied by a professional driver. When we know a person who has a professional licence we don't need to go to a driving lesson agency any more. What is the hardest procedure that you have to take for you to obtain a driver's license? It is where people fail. I am not really frightening or scaring you. The reflection of the light really affects his eyes. Probably, it is too bright for his eyes. There are some glasses that are intended for some people who are affected by those bright lights. It turns transparent when there are few cars that will be interacting with other cars. You told me that you have bad eye sight. My bad eye sight will come back. You always have to put some dropper. You really have to show me the difference of no glasses and with glasses.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Absolutely great job!!! Your dictation skills has really been improving! I hope you can continue doing that to enhance your skills. Next time, I will speak faster^^ Challenge! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear Teacher, >> Correct. Good morning! >> Correct. Time goes very fast! >> Correct. It is the end of February! Wow! >> Correct. Let\'s greet new month with a happy heart! >> Let\'s greet the new month with a happy heart. Have a great weekend and see you on Monday! ^^** >> Correct. *Reviewing our class >> Correct. I am going to go a lonesome place to practice driving a car. >> Correct. You mean to say that you want to go to isolated places? >> Correct. You have several ways to pass the exam. >> Correct. We are going to be accompanied by a professional driver. >> Correct. When we know a person who has a professional licence we don\'t need to go to a driving lesson agency any more. >> When we know a person who has a professional lisence we don\'t need to go to a driving lesson agency any more.What is the hardest procedure that you have to take for you to obtain a driver\'s license? >> Correct. It is where people fail. >> Correct. I am not really frightening or scaring you. >> Correct. The reflection of the light really affects his eyes. >> Correct. Probably, it is too bright for his eyes. >> Correct. There are some glasses that are intended for some people who are affected by those bright lights. >> Correct. It turns transparent when there are few cars that will be interacting with other cars. >> Correct. You told me that you have bad eye sight. >> Correct. My bad eye sight will come back. >> Correct. You always have to put some dropper. >> Correct. You really have to show me the difference of no glasses and with glasses. >> Correct.

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