Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
I feel like today is Monday!
I guess you are also happy for our holiday because you can get up late tomorrow. ^^
Suddenly, I am thinking that I wish I could work only for 4 days a week. Hahaha!
That is all for today and see you on Wednesday!
Have a great day! ^^
P.S.: Please help me check the sentences that I reviewed below.
-Our government is not able to declare that Monday is also holiday.
-Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration of Monday is holiday if the holiday is in the middle?
-It is not as expensive as what you have there.
-Some movies are even out even before it is going to be shown here in the Philippines.
-If I can't sit at the back I just give up to see a movie in the theater.
-Kick him back!
-My seat is being kicked at the back.
-I don't sleep with lights off.
-I have to draw curtains.
-Are you a light sleeper? No, I am not. I am a deep sleeper.
-I don't want to continue sleeping for longer hours.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!How are you now? It seems like you got confused with your
first sentence. Kkkk
Check the corrections later on and I think I made the sentences
better and clearer.
See you on Wednesday!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectI feel like today is Monday!
>> Correct [My dear, did you mean \"I feel like today is Friday\"?]I guess you are also happy for our holiday because you can get up late tomorrow. ^^
>> CorrectSuddenly, I am thinking that I wish I could work only for 4 days a week. Hahaha!
>> Correct [I have thought of that several times! kkk]That is all for today and see you on Wednesday!
>> CorrectHave a great day! ^^
>> CorrectP.S.: Please help me check the sentences that I reviewed below. >> Correct-Our government is not able to declare that Monday is also holiday.
>> Correct-Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration of Monday is holiday if the holiday is in the middle?
>> Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration if the holiday falls on a Monday?-It is not as expensive as what you have there.
>> Correct-Some movies are even out even before it is going to be shown here in the Philippines.
>> Correct-If I can\'t sit at the back I just give up to see a movie in the theater.
>> Correct-Kick him back!
>> Correct-My seat is being kicked at the back.
>> My seat is being kicked from the back. -I don\'t sleep with lights off.
>> Correct-I have to draw curtains.
>> Correct-Are you a light sleeper? No, I am not. I am a deep sleeper.
>> Correct-I don\'t want to continue sleeping for longer hours.
>> Correct
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