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2016-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I feel like today is Monday! I guess you are also happy for our holiday because you can get up late tomorrow. ^^ Suddenly, I am thinking that I wish I could work only for 4 days a week. Hahaha! That is all for today and see you on Wednesday! Have a great day! ^^ P.S.: Please help me check the sentences that I reviewed below. -Our government is not able to declare that Monday is also holiday. -Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration of Monday is holiday if the holiday is in the middle? -It is not as expensive as what you have there. -Some movies are even out even before it is going to be shown here in the Philippines. -If I can't sit at the back I just give up to see a movie in the theater. -Kick him back! -My seat is being kicked at the back. -I don't sleep with lights off. -I have to draw curtains. -Are you a light sleeper? No, I am not. I am a deep sleeper. -I don't want to continue sleeping for longer hours.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!How are you now? It seems like you got confused with your first sentence. Kkkk Check the corrections later on and I think I made the sentences better and clearer. See you on Wednesday! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectI feel like today is Monday! >> Correct [My dear, did you mean \"I feel like today is Friday\"?]I guess you are also happy for our holiday because you can get up late tomorrow. ^^ >> CorrectSuddenly, I am thinking that I wish I could work only for 4 days a week. Hahaha! >> Correct [I have thought of that several times! kkk]That is all for today and see you on Wednesday! >> CorrectHave a great day! ^^ >> CorrectP.S.: Please help me check the sentences that I reviewed below. >> Correct-Our government is not able to declare that Monday is also holiday. >> Correct-Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration of Monday is holiday if the holiday is in the middle? >> Is it common for you to have this kind of declaration if the holiday falls on a Monday?-It is not as expensive as what you have there. >> Correct-Some movies are even out even before it is going to be shown here in the Philippines. >> Correct-If I can\'t sit at the back I just give up to see a movie in the theater. >> Correct-Kick him back! >> Correct-My seat is being kicked at the back. >> My seat is being kicked from the back. -I don\'t sleep with lights off. >> Correct-I have to draw curtains. >> Correct-Are you a light sleeper? No, I am not. I am a deep sleeper. >> Correct-I don\'t want to continue sleeping for longer hours. >> Correct

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