Composition

Good morning, Teacher! Yesterday, I went to see a movie with my boyfriend and the movie title is 'Going Back Home'. This Korean movie shows the fact of the sexual slavery in the period of Japanese occupancy. To celebrate Independence Movement Day (March 1), I wanted to realize how hard our old generation's life was. The feeling that I got after watching it was that our country still doesn't have power to correct wrong things in history. Well, I suddenly became sentimental. Anyway, I'd like to submit my sentences that I reviewed. See you! ^^** What is the day? There are different levels of cheating such as lying, having an affair or hiding something. If he lies about something, what would you do? She had a miscarriage. The company has a lot of debts. He hid all the information about the money of the company. You gave an extreme example. There is a reason why he hid it from me. The woman is very possessive. The men was okay with it in the beginning of the relationship. She is still doubtful about it. I don't want to disturb him when he is hanging out with his friends. It was not really intentional. Don't look at me that way. I feel suddenly it seems like you are looking at me very skeptically.

Hi, [이름]! Having this kind of topic in our class makes us really interested in it!^^ I hope that this can help you enhance your ideas more and your speaking skill. Have a wonderful day!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectYesterday, I went to see a movie with my boyfriend and the movie title is \'Going Back Home\'. >> CorrectThis Korean movie shows the fact of the sexual slavery in the period of Japanese occupancy. >> This Korean movie shows the facts about the sexual slavery that happened in the period of Japanes occupancy/colonization.To celebrate Independence Movement Day (March 1), I wanted to realize how hard our old generation\'s life was. >> CorrectThe feeling that I got after watching it was that our country still doesn\'t have power to correct wrong things in history. >> I realized after watching it was that our country still doesn\'t have the power to correct wrong things in our history.Well, I suddenly became sentimental. >> CorrectAnyway, I\'d like to submit my sentences that I reviewed. >> CorrectSee you! ^^** >> CorrectWhat is the day? >> Correct or>> What\'s the day today? There are different levels of cheating such as lying, having an affair or hiding something. >> CorrectIf he lies about something, what would you do? >> CorrectShe had a miscarriage. >> CorrectThe company has a lot of debts. >> CorrectHe hid all the information about the money of the company. >> CorrectYou gave an extreme example. >> Correct [Did I???]There is a reason why he hid it from me. >> CorrectThe woman is very possessive. >> CorrectThe men was okay with it in the beginning of the relationship. >> CorrectShe is still doubtful about it. >> CorrectI don\'t want to disturb him when he is hanging out with his friends. >> CorrectIt was not really intentional. >> Correct Don\'t look at me that way. >> CorrectI feel suddenly it seems like you are looking at me very skeptically. >> Correct