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2016-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good evening, Teacher! I passed two stages of the driver's test so I can practice driving a car with 'practice licence' on the roads from now on. I am a little bit scared and can't imagine myself when I am driving a car. I think obtaining a driver's license will depend on who teaches me and how much time I can spend on learning it. It will be a hard and exciting time for me. See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Congratulations!^^
I remembered the time I also drove on the main road. It
really made me nervous but eventually, I was able to overcome that fear.
After that, I just wanted to drive longer and longer! kkk
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good evening, Teacher! 
>> Correct
I passed two stages of the driver\'s test so I can practice driving a car with \'practice licence\' on the roads from now on.
>> I passed two stages of the driver\'s test so I can practice driving a car with a \"practice license\" on the road from now on.
I am a little bit scared and can\'t imagine myself when I am driving a car.
>> Correct
I think obtaining a driver\'s license will depend on who teaches me and how much time I can spend on learning it.
>> Correct
It will be a hard and exciting time for me. 
>> Correct
See you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct

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