Composition

2016-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It seems like days pass very quickly this week. Somehow, I am thinking that there is no time to lose. Suddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and traveling anywhere. Well, it seems like the warm weather makes me sentimental. Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^** *Reviewing -Who is the professional driver that you are going to practice with? -How often will you practice together? -The one thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but is about confidence. -It is really on a hill. -Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Bagio city. -We still have manual cars. -It might lesson up its engine. -Seoul is also on top of the mountain. -It is not only steep but it is also going zigzag. -What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lessen? -That was one thing that I was unable to learn. -I studied it on my own. -Aren't you afraid of some drivers coming near you? -Have you heard about defensive driving?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!I\'ve noticed some sentences that I mentioned that do not have a perfect grammar. I apologize if I made mistakes about them. See you on Monday and enjoy your weekend, too! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectIt seems like days pass very quickly this week. >> CorrectSomehow, I am thinking that there is no time to lose. >> CorrectSuddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and traveling anywhere. >> Suddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and just travel anywhere. Well, it seems like the warm weather makes me sentimental. >> CorrectAnyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**>> Correct*Reviewing -Who is the professional driver that you are going to practice with? >> Correct-How often will you practice together? >> Correct-The one thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but is about confidence.>> One thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but about confidence. -It is really on a hill. >> Correct-Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Bagio city. >> Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Baguio city. -We still have manual cars. >> Correct-It might lesson up its engine. >> It might loosen up its engine. -Seoul is also on top of the mountain. >> Correct-It is not only steep but it is also going zigzag. >> Correct-What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lessen? >> What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lesson?-That was one thing that I was unable to learn. >> Correct-I studied it on my own. >> I studied about it on my own. -Aren\'t you afraid of some drivers coming near you? >> Correct-Have you heard about defensive driving? >> Correct

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