Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
It seems like days pass very quickly this week.
Somehow, I am thinking that there is no time to lose.
Suddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and traveling anywhere.
Well, it seems like the warm weather makes me sentimental.
Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
*Reviewing
-Who is the professional driver that you are going to practice with?
-How often will you practice together?
-The one thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but is about confidence.
-It is really on a hill.
-Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Bagio city.
-We still have manual cars.
-It might lesson up its engine.
-Seoul is also on top of the mountain.
-It is not only steep but it is also going zigzag.
-What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lessen?
-That was one thing that I was unable to learn.
-I studied it on my own.
-Aren't you afraid of some drivers coming near you?
-Have you heard about defensive driving?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!I\'ve noticed some sentences that I mentioned
that do not have a perfect grammar. I apologize
if I made mistakes about them.
See you on Monday and enjoy your weekend, too!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectIt seems like days pass very quickly this week.
>> CorrectSomehow, I am thinking that there is no time to lose.
>> CorrectSuddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and traveling anywhere.
>> Suddenly, I feel like throwing my formal tasks and just travel anywhere. Well, it seems like the warm weather makes me sentimental.
>> CorrectAnyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**>> Correct*Reviewing -Who is the professional driver that you are going to practice with?
>> Correct-How often will you practice together?
>> Correct-The one thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but is about confidence.>> One thing that I want you to learn more is not about driving but about confidence.
-It is really on a hill.
>> Correct-Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Bagio city.
>> Automatic cars are not appropriate and advisable here in Baguio city. -We still have manual cars.
>> Correct-It might lesson up its engine.
>> It might loosen up its engine. -Seoul is also on top of the mountain.
>> Correct-It is not only steep but it is also going zigzag.
>> Correct-What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lessen?
>> What is the most challenging part for you when you go to your driving lesson?-That was one thing that I was unable to learn.
>> Correct-I studied it on my own.
>> I studied about it on my own. -Aren\'t you afraid of some drivers coming near you?
>> Correct-Have you heard about defensive driving?
>> Correct
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