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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! First of all, regarding your sentences that you mentioned on our class, you don't need to feel sorry because of some wrong grammar. If you are going to ask me to speak Korean perfectly, I can definitely say that I won't. It is already great for you to be able to correct somebody's mistakes in speaking English. It is always very useful for me to check your correction on my dictation. Now, I am going to submit my sentences that I took for dictation. Please help me check them again today. Have a nice day and see you tomorrow! ^^** -It is much better if you have an office partner for you to vent some problems out. -Your workmate can understand the situation since you are working in the same environment. -Some of us have this perception that you have to tell everything to your real life partner. -Not telling those things regarding your workplaces is an act of hiding. -What type of personality do you have? -You wouldn't really demand him to tell you those things. -You can already see your boyfriend having this problematic face. -Aren't you going to be curious about what is happening in his workplace? -I would be the best person who can comfort him. -When would you stop spying on him?

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for understanding my flaws. As a teacher, I may say that there would be times I commit mistakes. I admit them and learn from them. However, some people do not accept those mistakes. Thank you for not being one of them.^^ Have a wonderful day! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectFirst of all, regarding your sentences that you mentioned on our class, you don\'t need to feel sorry because of some wrong grammar. >> First of all, regarding your sentences that you mentioned in our class, you don\'t need to feel sorry because of some wrong grammar.If you are going to ask me to speak Korean perfectly, I can definitely say that I won\'t. >> CorrectIt is already great for you to be able to correct somebody\'s mistakes in speaking English. >> CorrectIt is always very useful for me to check your correction on my dictation. >> CorrectNow, I am going to submit my sentences that I took for dictation. >> CorrectPlease help me check them again today. >> CorrectHave a nice day and see you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct-It is much better if you have an office partner for you to vent some problems out. >> Correct-Your workmate can understand the situation since you are working in the same environment. >> Correct-Some of us have this perception that you have to tell everything to your real life partner. >> Correct-Not telling those things regarding your workplaces is an act of hiding. >> Correct -What type of personality do you have? >> Correct-You wouldn\'t really demand him to tell you those things. >> Correct-You can already see your boyfriend having this problematic face. >> Correct-Aren\'t you going to be curious about what is happening in his workplace? >> Correct-I would be the best person who can comfort him. >> Correct-When would you stop spying on him? >> Correct

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