Composition

2016-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Here in Korea, we are experiencing the yellow dust. As soon as the cold weather are gone, we have an unwelcome guest again. Because of this, I could not dry my laundry in the sun last weekend. I guess you won't have this kind of terrible air condition there, will you? At this moment, I am really envious of you. Anyway, I'd like to submit my sentences that I took for dictation below. See you tomorrow! -Tuesday is not yet talking your energy. -I need to compensate for the loss time that I had before. -I feel same way. -I believe there are still times when you eat in fast food restaurants. -French fries are one of the finger foods that we usually dig in. -It can be a substitute for other oily fast foods. -I already have this idea that it is not authentic.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!At this point, I am about to charge my energy back but I wanted to check your homework first.^^ Thank you for being a diligent student and I hope you can find time to check on your corrections for today. Have a wonderful Tuesday then!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Teacher! >> CorrectHere in Korea, we are experiencing the yellow dust. >> CorrectAs soon as the cold weather are gone, we have an unwelcome guest again. >> As soon as the cold weather is gone, we have an unwelcomed guest again. Because of this, I could not dry my laundry in the sun last weekend. >> Because of this, I wasn\'t able to dry my laundgry under the sun last weekend.I guess you won\'t have this kind of terrible air condition there, will you? >> CorrectAt this moment, I am really envious of you. >> CorrectAnyway, I\'d like to submit my sentences that I took for dictation below. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct-Tuesday is not yet talking your energy. >> Tuesday is not yet taking/sucking your energy.-I need to compensate for the loss time that I had before. >> I need to compensated for the lost time I had before.-I feel same way. >> I feel the same way.-I believe there are still times when you eat in fast food restaurants. >> Correct-French fries are one of the finger foods that we usually dig in. >> Correct-It can be a substitute for other oily fast foods. >> Correct

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