Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
Here in Korea, we are experiencing the yellow dust.
As soon as the cold weather are gone, we have an unwelcome guest again.
Because of this, I could not dry my laundry in the sun last weekend.
I guess you won't have this kind of terrible air condition there, will you?
At this moment, I am really envious of you.
Anyway, I'd like to submit my sentences that I took for dictation below.
See you tomorrow!
-Tuesday is not yet talking your energy.
-I need to compensate for the loss time that I had before.
-I feel same way.
-I believe there are still times when you eat in fast food restaurants.
-French fries are one of the finger foods that we usually dig in.
-It can be a substitute for other oily fast foods.
-I already have this idea that it is not authentic.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!At this point, I am about to charge my energy back
but I wanted to check your homework first.^^
Thank you for being a diligent student
and I hope you can find time to check on your corrections for today.
Have a wonderful Tuesday then!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectHere in Korea, we are experiencing the yellow dust.
>> CorrectAs soon as the cold weather are gone, we have an unwelcome guest again.
>> As soon as the cold weather is gone, we have an unwelcomed guest again. Because of this, I could not dry my laundry in the sun last weekend.
>> Because of this, I wasn\'t able to dry my laundgry under the sun last weekend.I guess you won\'t have this kind of terrible air condition there, will you?
>> CorrectAt this moment, I am really envious of you.
>> CorrectAnyway, I\'d like to submit my sentences that I took for dictation below.
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow! >> Correct-Tuesday is not yet talking your energy.
>> Tuesday is not yet taking/sucking your energy.-I need to compensate for the loss time that I had before.
>> I need to compensated for the lost time I had before.-I feel same way.
>> I feel the same way.-I believe there are still times when you eat in fast food restaurants.
>> Correct-French fries are one of the finger foods that we usually dig in.
>> Correct-It can be a substitute for other oily fast foods.
>> Correct
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