Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning and Happy Birthday to you again!
I am going to announce on this composition page that today is Erine's birthday so that many people can be aware of this special day.
I just hope you will have good memories that will make you feel happy today.
Finally, I am sorry for being negative on this special day. ^^;;
I can defiantly say that I am lucky to have a teacher like you.
You helped me charge my energy in our class.
Have a wonderful day and weekend! ^^
See you on Monday!
P.S.: Did your mother send you an message? ^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
Once again, thank you for the greetings!^^
Thanks also for making effort in writing this compostion!^^
I will always be your positive side whatever happens.
Always remember that!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning and Happy Birthday to you again!
>> CorrectI am going to announce on this composition page that today is Erine\'s birthday so that many people can be aware of this special day.
>> Correct I just hope you will have good memories that will make you feel happy today.
>> CorrectFinally, I am sorry for being negative on this special day. ^^;;
>> CorrectI can defiantly say that I am lucky to have a teacher like you.
>> CorrectYou helped me charge my energy in our class. >> Correct
Have a wonderful day and weekend! ^^See you on Monday!
>> CorrectP.S.: Did your mother send you an message? ^^
>> Correct (As of the moment, my mom hasn\'t sent me a message!)
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