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2011-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I already requsted an eRO. But "Hwang Mok Park" vendor is first time and we didn't have vendor no. yet. It takes 2month for making vendor no. Can I waiting for making vendor no. or just use 3000500 #? What shall we do? I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! ^^, You composed a good letter that relays the message well. Just take note of the following corrections and suggestion I have made for the further improvement of your letter. I hope to recieve more of your compositions in the future. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Here are the following corrections I have made for you to study: ^^, Dear [Name]. [Name],Good morning! I already requsted an eRO.>>> Correct >>> Good morning! I have already requsted an E.R.O.But "Hwang Mok Park" vendor is first time and we didn't have vendor no. yet.>>> But it is our first time as a "Hwang Mok Park" vendor and we didn't have any vendor number yet.It takes 2month for making vendor no.>>> It takes two months to make a vendor number. >>> Making a vendor number takes two months.Can I waiting for making vendor no. or just use 3000500 #?>>> Should I wait for the vendor number to be finished or should I just use the 3000500 number?What shall we do?>>> CorrectI'm looking forward to your reply.>>> CorrectThank you. >>> Correct

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