Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi once again, [이름]!^^
KKK
I was really surprise that you still remember those things about my clothes!
Yep, it\'s getting hotter here. I did regret
wearing long sleeves shirt today!
Have a great weekend
and drive safely!^^
~~teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It is a happy Friday!
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Here in Korea, I can feel a scene of spring nowadays.
>> Here in Korea, I can feel the scene of spring nowadays.
However, the fine dust and yellow dust can still be a problem for us to go out.
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How about the weather there?
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Is it getting hotter?
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I remember that you were wearing short sleeves these days!
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I will also experience the hot weather very soon.
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Well, greeting the hot weather is not that bad. ^^:;
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Anyway, I hope you can spend your precious time with your loved ones this weekend!
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See you on Monday! ^^**
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