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2016-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It is a happy Friday! Here in Korea, I can feel a scene of spring nowadays. However, the fine dust and yellow dust can still be a problem for us to go out. How about the weather there? Is it getting hotter? I remember that you were wearing short sleeves these days! I will also experience the hot weather very soon. Well, greeting the hot weather is not that bad. ^^:; Anyway, I hope you can spend your precious time with your loved ones this weekend! See you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi once again, [이름]!^^

KKK

I was really surprise that you still remember those things about my clothes!

Yep, it\'s getting hotter here. I did regret

wearing long sleeves shirt today!

Have a great weekend

and drive safely!^^
~~teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 It is a happy Friday! 

>> Correct
Here in Korea, I can feel a scene of spring nowadays. 

>> Here in Korea, I can feel the scene of spring nowadays.
However, the fine dust and yellow dust can still be a problem for us to go out. 

>> Correct
 How about the weather there? 

>> Correct
 Is it getting hotter?

>> Correct [Definitely!]
 I remember that you were wearing short sleeves these days! 

>> Correct [You still remember that????kkkk]
 I will also experience the hot weather very soon. 

>> Correct
 Well, greeting the hot weather is not that bad. ^^:;

>> Correct
 Anyway, I hope you can spend your precious time with your loved ones this weekend! 

>> Correct
 See you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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