Composition

Hello there, [이름]!
Thank you for telling me about your plans

about your schedule~

Keep on doing your composition and

I will not get tired of checking them!^^
See you again tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher, 

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Good morning! 

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Regarding my class, I already changed my points to our classes. 

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I can take a few free classes more until the end of this month. 

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This is the one of the important reasons why I can\'t stop studying here in Power English. ^^;;

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 Whenever I make a composition, my level is not only higher but I can also get free classes. 

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 After finishing the free classes, I will apply for my new class again.

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 It would be a waste of time if I stop studying English here at this stage.

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 Anyway, please help me check the sentences that I wrote below. 

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See you tomorrow! ^^**

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 -A driver used the other lane to over take. 

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-She almost hit the car. 

>> She was almost hit by the car.
-Can you categorize them?

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 -Men tend to procrastinate.

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 -In this situation, the ego will go down.

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 -Look into the brighter side if your boss is there, then you will be more productive.

>> Look into the brighter side. If you boss is there, then you will be more productive.
 -It is out of job description. 

>> It is out of their job description.
-We still have plenty of workload.

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