Composition

2016-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! After our class, I looked at the Easter eggs again but I still can't tell which one is yours. Since I already voted it and don't have a chance to vote again, I am just going to wait for the result out. I think all teachers made it well and I can see their efforts on those eggs. This kind of competition is a good idea for you to commemorate your holiday. Even if I am already sure that I didn't choose yours, there is still a chance for you to win a prize. ^^;; Good luck to you! I have been curious about which one is yours until the result is out. Anyway, please check those sentences below. See you tomorrow! ^^** -It is the most important season for our religion. -Thank you for participating our Easter egg competition. -Our boss cuts his nails at his desk. -The ink of the pen goes inside my nails. -Would it be very impolite if you tell him about that? -I am really trying to tune my voice down.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!^^

Thank you so much for participating!^^ kkk

It might be hard for you to distinguish what my entry was.

kkk

However, it may not really reflect my personality.

You have chosen your best choice so it is already enough!^^
Take care~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
After our class, I looked at the Easter eggs again but I still can\'t tell which one is yours. 

>> Correct
Since I already voted it and don\'t have a chance to vote again, I am just going to wait for the result out. 

>> Correct
 I think all teachers made it well and I can see their efforts on those eggs. 

>> Correct 
This kind of competition is a good idea for you to commemorate your holiday. 

>> Correct
 Even if I am already sure that I didn\'t choose yours, there is still a chance for you to win a prize. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Good luck to you! 

>> Correct
 I have been curious about which one is yours until the result is out. 

>> Correct 
Anyway, please check those sentences below. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct
 -It is the most important season for our religion. 

>> Correct
 -Thank you for participating our Easter egg competition. 

>> Thank you for participating in our Easter egg competition.
 -Our boss cuts his nails at his desk. 

>> Correct
 -The ink of the pen goes inside my nails. 

>> Correct
 -Would it be very impolite if you tell him about that?

>> Correct
 -I am really trying to tune my voice down.

>> Correct

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