Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름], happy Wednesday again!^^
Yep I am also excited and I know you envy me because I will have vacation.
But it\'s not just a vacation. It\' s also our time to pray. So, this will be the best time
for us to gather again with our family and friends, be bonded by prayers so we
can keep holding on to whatever struggles we may encounter in the future.
Ooops... too much drama!^^ kkkk
See you tomorrow!
Dear Teacher!
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A good day to you!
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Your holiday is coming soon.
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I am happy for you and envy you! ^^
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I hope the weather will be very sunny during your holiday and help you spend good time with your family!
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See you tomorrow!^^**
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P.S.: Please help me check those sentences below.
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-I am very sensitive when it comes to the cleanliness of my nose.
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-My previous company went bankrupt.
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-Can I submit my resume for me to apply to your company?
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-What kind of company would you like to establish?
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-Someone\'s foresight is a kind of ability to see what is likely to happen in the future.
>> To foresee is the ability to see what is likely to happen in the future.
-The next most important thing is the business plan itself.
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