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2011-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I asked "Hwang Mok Park" 's Finance guy a DUNS number. But she said that they didn't have a DUNS number. So we use the dummy until month end. We will request that "Hwang Mok Park" 's Finance guy creat a DUNS number and we will use vendor number from next time. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Bella^^ Once again you have done well. I'm so glad that you take the time to compose because it really helps you a lot, especially when you incorporate English in your daily life. The best way to learn English, is to speak and write in English more often. You have done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work and keep on practicing. Dear [Name]. [Name],I asked "Hwang Mok Park" 's Finance guy a DUNS number.>>> I asked the Hwang Mok Park's finance personnel about their DUNS number.But she said that they didn't have a DUNS number.>>> CorrectSo we use the dummy until month end.>>> So we shall use the dummy until the end of the month. >>> So we shall use the dummy until the month's end.We will request that "Hwang Mok Park" 's Finance guy creat a DUNS number and we will use vendor number from next time.>>> We will request for the Hwang Mok Park's finance personnel to create a DUNS number and we will use our vendor number for the mean time.Thank you.>>> Correct

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