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2016-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! Happy holiday! The weather is good today here. I really want to go out to breathe the fresh air. However, unfortunately, there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with. Well, I think it is office worker's fate. ^^;; Anyway, be careful when you go back home! As an extension of our class, checking out your personal belongings well. ^^ Finally, have a nice holiday with your family. See you on Monday!

강사 첨삭

[이름],

Thank you so much for all the reminders you have given me!^^

I already double check the things I have to bring. But I will still triple check

my bag later!^^

Thank you once again!

I\'ll see you soon!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Happy holiday! 

>> Correct
 The weather is good today here. 

>> The weather here today is good.
 I really want to go out to breathe the fresh air.

>> I really want to go out to breathe fresh air.
 However, unfortunately, there are a lot of tasks that I have to deal with. 

>> Correct
 Well, I think it is office worker\'s fate. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Anyway, be careful when you go back home! 

>> Correct
 As an extension of our class, checking out your personal belongings well. ^^

>> Correct
 Finally, have a nice holiday with your family. 

>> Correct
 See you on Monday!

>> Correct

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