Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, my dear, [이름]!^^
First of all, I would like to say \"Break a leg.\"
I know that you can do it. I never doubt your skills
so never doubt yourself!^^
Second, thank you for cheering me up.
If only I could explain everything over the phone, I would.
But I can\'t. I hope you understand.
See you tomorrow, [이름]~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher!
>> Dear teacher,
Yesterday,my absence was a blessing in disguise for the both of us. ^^;;
>> Correct.
By the way, I have already decided to take a driving test next Monday.
>> By the way, I have already decided to take the driving test next Monday.
I am going to take one day off under a chance of the Chinese holiday on that day.
>> Correct.
I have two weaknesses in driving a car.
>> Correct.
The first one is the speed.
>> Correct.
I must not exceed 60 km but when I change the lane, I tend to speed up.
>> Correct.
The other one is about the traffic signals.
>> Correct.
I am scared if the signal is suddenly turned into the red.
>> I am scared if the signal suddenly turns into red.
You told me that it is a matter of practice.
>> Correct
I totally agree with your opinion.
>> Correct.
This weekend is my last chance to practice.
>> Correct.
In order not to bother my boyfriend anymore, I am going to do my best. ^^:;
>> Correct.
Anyway, I\'d like to say to you that \'Cheer up\'.
>> Correct.
See you tomorrow!
>> Correct.
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