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2016-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! Yesterday,my absence was a blessing in disguise for the both of us. ^^;; By the way, I have already decided to take a driving test next Monday. I am going to take one day off under a chance of the Chinese holiday on that day. I have two weaknesses in driving a car. The first one is the speed. I must not exceed 60 km but when I change the lane, I tend to speed up. The other one is about the traffic signals. I am scared if the signal is suddenly turned into the red. You told me that it is a matter of practice. I totally agree with your opinion. This weekend is my last chance to practice. In order not to bother my boyfriend anymore, I am going to do my best. ^^:; Anyway, I'd like to say to you that 'Cheer up'. See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello, my dear, [이름]!^^

First of all, I would like to say \"Break a leg.\"

I know that  you can do it. I never doubt your skills

so never  doubt yourself!^^

Second, thank you for cheering me up.

If only I could explain everything over the phone, I would.

But I can\'t. I hope you understand.

See you tomorrow, [이름]~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher! 

>> Dear teacher,
Yesterday,my absence was a blessing in disguise for the both of us. ^^;;

>> Correct.
By the way, I have already decided to take a driving test next Monday. 

>> By the way, I have already decided to take the driving test next Monday.
I am going to take one day off under a chance of the Chinese holiday on that day. 

>> Correct.
I have two weaknesses in driving a car. 

>> Correct.
The first one is the speed. 

>> Correct.

I must not exceed 60 km but when I change the lane, I tend to speed up. 

>> Correct.
 The other one is about the traffic signals.

>> Correct.
 I am scared if the signal is suddenly turned into the red. 

>> I am scared if the signal suddenly turns into red.
 You told me that it is a matter of practice. 

>> Correct
 I totally agree with your opinion. 

>> Correct.
 This weekend is my last chance to practice.

>> Correct.
 In order not to bother my boyfriend anymore, I am going to do my best. ^^:;

>> Correct.
 Anyway, I\'d like to say to you that \'Cheer up\'.

>> Correct.
 See you tomorrow!

>> Correct. 

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