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2016-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Thanks for giving me good tips in relation to the driving skill. Someone is really good at driving even if the person is a beginner, on the other hand, someone has a terrible skill when it comes to driving a car. I think the skill was inborn. Hehehe ^^:; Of course, I admit that only 1% was inborn and 99% depends on perspiration. After all, defensive driving is the most important thing that I have to keep in mind. I can see many drivers not keeping the rules on the road and violate the signals and lights. How I wish all drivers always would follow the rules! If so, all accidents might disappear. Anyway, have a nice day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, [이름]!~^^

In any ways, I will always like to extend my help.^^

There are always ways for us to do to contradict the negative

traits that are innate. So, whenever we think that we were born

with negativities, let\'s always consider our perseverance

to avoid thinking more negatively!^^

Have a great day!
~~Teacher Erine

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Thanks for giving me good tips in relation to the driving skill.

>> Correct
 Someone is really good at driving even if the person is a beginner, on the other hand, someone has a terrible skill when it comes to driving a car. 

>> Correct
 I think the skill was inborn. Hehehe ^^:; 

>> Correct 
Of course, I admit that only 1% was inborn and 99% depends on perspiration.

>> Correct
 After all, defensive driving is the most important thing that I have to keep in mind.

>> Correct
 I can see many drivers not keeping the rules on the road and violate the signals and lights. 

>> I can see many drivers who do not keep the rules on the road and violate the signals and lights.
 How I wish all drivers always would follow the rules!

>> How I wish all drivers would always follow the rules.
 If so, all accidents might disappear.

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a nice day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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