Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, [이름]!^^
Don\'t you worry because the teachers here in
Power English are also addicted to the drama except me.
I am more interested in some replays of volleyball games nowadays!^^
kkkk
See you tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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These days, all women here in Korea are into one drama entitled \'Descendants Of The Sun\'.
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Have you heard about it?
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In the beginning, I was\'t interested in the drama and didn\'t watch it.
>> In the beginning, I wasn\'t interested in the drama and didn\'t watch it.
However, people around me told me that I must see it so I just started watching it without any expectation.
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Unbelievably, I am also into the drama and even the main male character is appearing in my dream.
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I am usually not a fanatic to actors but this case is not the same with before.
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This drama is showed on TV in 16 parts and its 12th episode is going to be broadcast this evening.
>> this drama is showed on TV in 16 parts and its 12th episode is going to be broadcasted this evening.
I am unable to watch it in real-time on TV because I only watched its 5th episode.
>> I am unable to watch it in real time on TV because I have only watched its 5th episode.
I somehow feel that it is too lovely to watch. Hehehe ^^;;
>> I somehow feel that it is very lovely to watch. (\"too\" gives a negative meaning to the adjective it describes.\"
If you think the drama is interesting, enjoy it on weekend.
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See you tomorrow and have a good day! ^^**
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