Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, Teacher!
I am back to my office now and I'd like to ask you to check my sentences below.
Have a great weekend and see you next Tuesday!
P.S.: I asked for a leave on Monday because of my personal reason.
I will tell you what I did on Tuesday. ^^~
-I can tolerate heat.
-If I have a scarf in this kind of weather, other people would laugh at me.
-When you have your fever, it indicates that there is an infection.
-It can damage the other organs in our body.
-You have to drink medicine for you to eliminate the fever.
-It is an indication that you will have something inside.
-When I was in my nursing school, it was my passion to tell how it works.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
I saw your composition today so I had a chance to
check it.
When I found out that you will be out tomorrow,
I felt a little sad. However, I respect that personal reason of
yours. I hope that you will be successful
in whatever you will do tomorrow. I\'ll see you then on Tuesday!^^
Don\'t forget to call the managers about your schedule!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good evening, Teacher!
>> Correct
I am back to my office now and I\'d like to ask you to check my sentences below.
>> Correct
Have a great weekend and see you next Tuesday!
>> Correct
P.S.: I asked for a leave on Monday because of my personal reason.
>> Correct.
I will tell you what I did on Tuesday. ^^~
>> Correct
-I can tolerate heat.
>> Correct
-If I have a scarf in this kind of weather, other people would laugh at me.
>> If I had a scarf in this kind of weather, other people would laugh at me.
-When you have your fever, it indicates that there is an infection.
>> Correct
-It can damage the other organs in our body.
>> Correct
-You have to drink medicine for you to eliminate the fever.
>> You have to drink medicine for you to alleviate fever.
-It is an indication that you will have something inside.
>> Correct
-When I was in my nursing school, it was my passion to tell how it works.
>> Correct
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