Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름], very well explained!^^
While I was reading your homework,
I could imagine what had happened during
your trip!^^
I felt like I was with you at that time. Now, I
have my muscle pain, too!^^
kkkk
I am still very lucky, whether you have short or longer time, to have
you in my class.
See you tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I just registered my class again but you can find that my class time is shorter than current one.
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Because of the change of my company regulation, the support for employees has been reduced.
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However, I am still lucky to keep on study English with you and I am contented with this situation.
>> However, I am still lucky to keep on studying English with you and I am contented with this situation.
By the way, my boyfriend and I set off to see the west sea last Saturday.
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When it comes to the west side of Korea, we can see the wonderful sunset and enjoy the mudflat.
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On the first day, we dug out a lot of clams at the mudflat for three hours
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On the second day, we had a severe muscle pain because of the labor of yesterday.
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However, we could not waste our precious time so we decided to go to a mountain to see a waterfall.
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Even though we felt very tired before going up, the fresh air and wonderful view made us feel relaxed after reaching at the top of the mountain.
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Now, I am still suffering from my muscle pain but if I were given a chance to experience the mudflat again, I would\'t hesitate to do it.
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Anyway, have a great time and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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