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2016-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher, A good day to you! Today is our last class this week and I will meet you on Monday. I want to take a rest for a few days and I also want to give you some time to take a break. I am not sure if it would be useful for you but I believe that you can have your private time at least. Don't miss me too much. ^^;; Hehehe! Cheer up for the rest of this week and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

How come you didn\'t inform me about your leave?
I wasn\'t ready! TT.TT

Anyway, I hope that you will be happy and satisfied during

the days that I will not meet you.

I think you got the sentence wrong. I should be the one

saying \"Don\'t miss me too much.\".

KKKK

Keep safe, [이름]!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher, 

>> Correct
 A good day to you! 

>> Correct
 Today is our last class this week and I will meet you on Monday. 

>> Correct
 I want to take a rest for a few days and I also want to give you some time to take a break. 

>> Correct
 I am not sure if it would be useful for you but I believe that you can have your private time at least. 

>> Correct
 Don\'t miss me too much. ^^;; Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 Cheer up for the rest of this week and see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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