Composition

2016-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! How is it going? Even though we don't have a class this week, I still want to send greetings to you. By the way, time is so past. It is already Friday. In my case, I have to attend the wedding of one of my friends this Saturday. The weather is so good for them to hold a wedding. They have been dating for 8 years so this wedding ceremony is very special for them. Because of a tight budget, they can't help but postpone their wedding. Now, they can afford to rent a house by their saving. I admire their efforts and considerable minds for lover. I can feel that love is the greatest thing in the world through them again. Anyway, that is all for today and see you on Monday! Have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Long time no talk. Kkk

Time is really fast but it seemed like that

we didn\'t talk for a month!

How are you doing? Thanks for the composition.

Enjoy the wedding and congratulations to your friend!^^

See you soon!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 How is it going?

>> Correct
 Even though we don\'t have a class this week, I still want to send greetings to you. 

>> Correct
 By the way, time is so past. 

>> By the way, time is so fast.
 It is already Friday. 

>> Correct
 In my case, I have to attend the wedding of one of my friends this Saturday. 

>> Correct
 The weather is so good for them to hold a wedding. 

>> Correct
 They have been dating for 8 years so this wedding ceremony is very special for them. 

>> They have been a couple for 8 years so this wedding ceremony is very special for them.
 Because of a tight budget, they can\'t help but postpone their wedding.

>> Correct
 Now, they can afford to rent a house by their saving. 

>> Correct
 I admire their efforts and considerable minds for lover.

>> Correct
 I can feel that love is the greatest thing in the world through them again.

>> Correct
 Anyway, that is all for today and see you on Monday! 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

>> Correct

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