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2016-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! Good morning! I feel that our time is really short again today. In order to make our time longer, I have to work hard to make more profits for our company. Hehehe! By the way, I have started feeling nervous because of my driving test. I even had a nightmare yesterday. The story of my nightmare was that I failed due to not fastening my seat belt. Oh My God! It is a basic rule, at the same time, it is the most important regulation that examinees must not forget. Apart from it, I also should keep a lot of rules in my mind. In order not to forget the 4 destinations, I am doing the image training by myself. I just hope that I will have a good luck in having a appropriate traffic lights change on that day. Anyway, have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Because of too much thinking, you experienced nightmare.

Don\'t overthink because it may cause negative results on you.

Take it positively. Just remember that your goal is to

pass the test and not to be nervous.

Don\'t pressure yourself, too!

Breathe and relax, [이름]!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Good morning! 

>> Correct
 I feel that our time is really short again today.

>> Correct
 In order to make our time longer, I have to work hard to make more profits for our company. Hehehe! 

>> Correct [Just don\'t exhaust yourself too much.]
 By the way, I have started feeling nervous because of my driving test. 

>> Correct
 I even had a nightmare yesterday. 

>> Correct
 The story of my nightmare was that I failed due to not fastening my seat belt.

>> Correct
 Oh My God!

>> Correct
 It is a basic rule, at the same time, it is the most important regulation that examinees must not forget.

>> Correct [Now, it is a signal that you must not forget.]
 Apart from it, I also should keep a lot of rules in my mind. 

>> Correct
 In order not to forget the 4 destinations, I am doing the image training by myself. 

>> Correct
 I just hope that I will have a good luck in having a appropriate traffic lights change on that day.

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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