Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher,
I am back to my office after taking a driving test.
I passed the test with 89 points. ^^
Now, I feel like a load has been taken off my chest.
Thank you to pray for me! ^^
I think it really worked on me.
Let's talk more about it tomorrow.
See you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Good morning!
I am very to know the good news!^^
I knew it! I knew that you can do it.
Your dedication is my proof!^^
See you later.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher,>> Correct
I am back to my office after taking a driving test.
I am back to my office after taking a driving test.
>> Correct
I passed the test with 89 points. ^^
I passed the test with 89 points. ^^
>> Correct [Congratulations!]
Now, I feel like a load has been taken off my chest.
Now, I feel like a load has been taken off my chest.
>> Correct
Thank you to pray for me! ^^
Thank you to pray for me! ^^
>> Thank you for praying for me.
I think it really worked on me.
I think it really worked on me.
>> Correct
Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow.
Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow.
>> Correct
See you tomorrow! ^^**
See you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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