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2016-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! It is already Friday! From yesterday, I am suffering from my muscle pain. The day before yesterday, I rode a bicycle 20 km so it seemed to make my muscle feel painful. To remove my pain, I did stretching yesterday, but it didn't work on me. I think it needs some time for my condition to go back to normal. I had better stay at home and take a rest tomorrow. I think too much is as bad as too little. ^^;; Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Good morning again, [이름]!^^

If you have muscle pain, try to have hot and cold compress.

Here are the instructions: 1) Apply cold compress for about 5 minutes.

2) Let it take a rest for 1 minute. 3) Apply hot compress for 5 minutes, as well.

It will soothe the muscles, thus, removing the pain afterwards.

I hope it will work.

Enjoy your weekend!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 It is already Friday! 

>> Correct
 From yesterday, I am suffering from my muscle pain. 

>> I have been suffering from muscle pain since yesterday.
 The day before yesterday, I rode a bicycle 20 km so it seemed to make my muscle feel painful. 

>> The day before yesterday, I rode a bicycle for 20 km long and it seemed like it made my muscle feel painful.
 To remove my pain, I did stretching yesterday, but it didn\'t work on me. 

>> Correct
 I think it needs some time for my condition to go back to normal. 

>> Correct
 I had better stay at home and take a rest tomorrow. 

>> I should stay at home and take a rest tomorrow.
 I think too much is as bad as too little. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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