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Good morning again, [이름]!^^
If you have muscle pain, try to have hot and cold compress.
Here are the instructions: 1) Apply cold compress for about 5 minutes.
2) Let it take a rest for 1 minute. 3) Apply hot compress for 5 minutes, as well.
It will soothe the muscles, thus, removing the pain afterwards.
I hope it will work.
Enjoy your weekend!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It is already Friday!
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From yesterday, I am suffering from my muscle pain.
>> I have been suffering from muscle pain since yesterday.
The day before yesterday, I rode a bicycle 20 km so it seemed to make my muscle feel painful.
>> The day before yesterday, I rode a bicycle for 20 km long and it seemed like it made my muscle feel painful.
To remove my pain, I did stretching yesterday, but it didn\'t work on me.
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I think it needs some time for my condition to go back to normal.
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I had better stay at home and take a rest tomorrow.
>> I should stay at home and take a rest tomorrow.
I think too much is as bad as too little. ^^;;
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Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
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