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학생이 쓴 원문
A happy Monday to you, Teacher!
Yesterday, I had my hair permed but it is too curly.
My hair is very thin so the perm really worked on my hair.
Well, I think I need some time to get used to my current hair style.
By the way, I drove a car with my boyfriend without a notice of ' I am practicing driving a car.' on the back window of the car yesterday.
Since I already have a driving licence, I don't need to attach it any longer.
I focused on parking a car and the result was not that bad.
However, I can't say that I am a real driver because I am unable to drive a car alone for now.
Well, I can feel that my driving skill is getting better so I am contented with my current situation.
I think It depends on how long I can practice for it.
Anyway, That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
P.S.: I hope you won't get stressed by your current situation.
I believe that you are a very talented and skilled teacher. ^^**
I am sure that you will get a good outcome sooner or later.
강사 첨삭
Good morning once again, [이름]!
As a starter, you really have to take driving
step by step. If you rush, you might get into an
accident. Because of the post at the back of your window,
the other drivers were very cautious with the
way they drive so you didn\'t have a hard time. kkk
Next time would be more of a challenge!
Good luck!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
A happy Monday to you, Teacher!
>> Correct.Yesterday, I had my hair permed but it is too curly.
>> Correct.My hair is very thin so the perm really worked on my hair.
>> Correct.Well, I think I need some time to get used to my current hair style. >> Correct.
By the way, I drove a car with my boyfriend without a notice of \' I am practicing driving a car.\' on the back window of the car yesterday.
>> By the way, I drove a car with my boyfriend without noticing the post \' I am practicing driving a car.\' on the back window of the car yesterday.
Since I already have a driving licence, I don\'t need to attach it any longer.
>> Since I already have a driver\'s lisence, I don\'t need to attach it any longer.
I focused on parking a car and the result was not that bad.
>> Correct.However, I can\'t say that I am a real driver because I am unable to drive a car alone for now.
>> Correct.Well, I can feel that my driving skill is getting better so I am contented with my current situation.
>> Correct.I think It depends on how long I can practice for it.
>> Correct.Anyway, That is all for today and see you tomorrow!
>> Correct.P.S.: I hope you won\'t get stressed by your current situation.
>> Correct. [Thanks, [이름].]I believe that you are a very talented and skilled teacher. ^^**
>> Correct.I am sure that you will get a good outcome sooner or later.
>> Correct.
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