Composition

Hi there, [이름]!^^

I agree with the sentence, \"As long as we don\'t affect a bad influence on other people while doing them, I think it is okay for us to follow them.\"

Here in the Philippines, we have a lot of superstitions. And some people might laugh at me, because

I really believe in them. I always tell them that there is no harm in doing it as long as I don\'t

hurt myself nor other people.

See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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Today, we talked about the superstition and It sounded really funny. 

>> Today, we talked about superstitions and it sounded really funny. 
There are some superstitions that Koreans believe. 

>> There are some superstitions that Koreans believe in. (We use believe + in when we talk about miracles, superstition or something we put our faith into. Don\'t be confused my dear.]
First, we believe that if we break a mirror or cup, it will bring a bad luck. 

>> First, we believe that if we break a mirror or cup, it will bring bad luck. 
Second, if we turn the spoon upside down on the table, we will lose our luck. 

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 Finally, we shouldn\'t cut our nails and wash our hair right before we have to encounter very important work. 

>> Finally, we shouldn\'t cut our nails and wash our hair right before encountering very important task [Before + noun]
 These superstitions sound like very funny and strange but many people including me follow those rules. Hehehe! 

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 As long as we don\'t affect a bad influence on other people while doing them, I think it is okay for us to follow them.

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 However, too much will make us paranoid.

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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