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2016-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! I'd like to introduce some superstitions more. 1. We should not put our hand on our head while lying down. 2. We usually don't do a important task on the date with the number 4. (4,14,24) 3. We should not stand a pillow against the wall or the head of the bed. 4. When we present a knife to a person, we have to receive little money even if it is considered as a a present. 5. When we present a wallet to a person, we should put some money in it. 6. We should not step the door threshold on. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday, [이름]!

Thanks for sharing the other superstitions that you have there in your country.

Some of the superstitions are the same with the ones we have here in the Philippines.

However, the other sentence was a bit confusing for me.
I hope you can make it clear.

See you tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I\'d like to introduce some superstitions more.

>> Correct
 1. We should not put our hand on our head while lying down. 

>> Correct
 2. We usually don\'t do a important task on the date with the number 4. (4,14,24)
>> We don\'t usually do an important task on dates with number 4 like 4,14, or 24.
3. We should not stand a pillow against the wall or the head of the bed. 

>> Correct
 4. When we present a knife to a person, we have to receive little money even if it is considered as a a present. 

>> When we give a knife to a person as a gift, we also have to give a little money to be part of the present. [It was a bit confusing.]
5. When we present a wallet to a person, we should put some money in it. 

>> Correct
 6. We should not step the door threshold on. 

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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