Composition

Hello, [이름]!

Upon reading your composition, it was also the time I was

informed about the earthquake.

As you know, I don\'t have a television in my apartment.

So I want to thank you for informing me.

Let\'s talk about it later.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher, 

>> Correct
 I heard that a 5 magnitude earthquake hit there in the Philippines. 

>> Correct [I wasn\'t aware. The place that experienced  it is in one of the major islands in the Philippines named Mindanao. I have just searched it now.]
 Fortunately, according to the news, no lives were lost. 

>> Correct
 However, these days, the earthquake also happened in Japan and Ecuador so this situation is considered as a very serious natural phenomenon.

>> Correct
 When this earthquake happened in Japan, people who live in the southern part of Korea was able to feel the tremors. 

>>  When this earthquake happened in Japan, people who live in the southern part of Korea were able to feel the tremors. 
Our country has ignored the earthquake and doesn\'t focus on an earthquake-resistant design when building structures so as long as we face this natural phenomenon, we can\'t ensure our safety. 

>> Our country has ignored the earthquake and doesn\'t focus on an earthquake-resistant design. When building structures face this natural phenomenon, we can\'t ensure our safety.
 Well, I think God punish and warn human beings by using this way. 

>>  Well, I think God punishes and warns human beings by using this way. 
 Anyway, I hope the damage from the earthquake won\'t be spreading. 

>> Anyway, I hope the damage from the earthquake won\'t be that worse.
 See you tomorrow!

>> Correct