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2016-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Today, we talked about the earthquake and I'd like to submit sentences that we used during our class. -Please don't sound like one of them. -I don't have any prejudice when it comes to Chinese people. -They tend to brag off or show off. -It was only that time that I knew about the earthquake. -My landlady should see it clean. -We are also prone to earthquake. -Buildings should be resistant to earthquake or hurricane. -That is one thing that we can't avoid from happening. -It was the biggest earthquake that they have ever experienced. -Do you have some earthquake drills? Have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭



Hello, [이름]!

Sorry if I checked your composition late.

Hence, thank you for being a very diligent student.

Keep it up and I can see the you are really improving.

Take care!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

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 Today, we talked about the earthquake and I\'d like to submit sentences that we used during our class. 

>>  Today, we talked about the earthquake and I\'d like to submit the sentences that we used during our class. 
 -Please don\'t sound like one of them.

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 -I don\'t have any prejudice when it comes to Chinese people. 

>> Correct
 -They tend to brag off or show off. 

>> Correct
 -It was only that time that I knew about the earthquake. 

>> Correct 
-My landlady should see it clean. 

>> Correct
 -We are also prone to earthquake.

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 -Buildings should be resistant to earthquake or hurricane. 

>> Correct
 -That is one thing that we can\'t avoid from happening. 

>> Correct
 -It was the biggest earthquake that they have ever experienced. 

>> Correct
 -Do you have some earthquake drills? 

>> Correct
 Have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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