Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Keep it up and I can see the you are really improving.
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~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Today, we talked about the earthquake and I\'d like to submit sentences that we used during our class.
>> Today, we talked about the earthquake and I\'d like to submit the sentences that we used during our class.
-Please don\'t sound like one of them.
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-I don\'t have any prejudice when it comes to Chinese people.
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-They tend to brag off or show off.
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-It was only that time that I knew about the earthquake.
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-My landlady should see it clean.
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-We are also prone to earthquake.
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-Buildings should be resistant to earthquake or hurricane.
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-That is one thing that we can\'t avoid from happening.
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-It was the biggest earthquake that they have ever experienced.
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-Do you have some earthquake drills?
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Have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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