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2016-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher, Good afternoon! At this moment, I know that you are already at home. I am somehow able to guess what you are doing now. Hahaha! Maybe, I would be the same with you this Sunday. ^^;; Don't skip a meal and spend your time healthier on weekend! See you on Monday! ^^

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!^^
I was laughing as I read your composition.

I was able to take a rest and just to let you know,

I always jog in the morning of Saturdays and really

try to sweat a lot and burn some fats. kkk.

It may not be enough so I have my follow up exercise

here at work!^^
See you later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher, 

>> Correct
Good afternoon!

>> Correct
 At this moment, I know that you are already at home. 

>> Correct
 I am somehow able to guess what you are doing now. Hahaha!

>> Correct
 Maybe, I would be the same with you this Sunday. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Don\'t skip a meal and spend your time healthier on weekend! 

>> Correct
 See you on Monday! ^^

>> Correct

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