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2016-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! The other day, I drove a car on the highway and needed to take a rest in an expressway rest area for a while. When I started our car to leave the place, I had to reverse the car but I suddenly jammed my foot on the accelerator and my boyfriend and I were very astonished at this unexpected situation. I heard that this situation is one of the mistakes that the beginners often make. Fortunately, at that time, no one was there so I didn't make the accidents happen. I felt that I must pay attention very carefully again. Driving a car is not a easy thing for me yet. Hehehe! Anyway, have a great Monday and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭


Hello there, [이름]!^^
Is your foot ok now? I hope you also didn\'t get

hurt from it.

I know the feeling when you make mistakes while driving.

But like what you said, you must be extra careful now.

See you again tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 The other day, I drove a car on the highway and needed to take a rest in an expressway rest area for a while. 

>> Correct
 When I started our car to leave the place, I had to reverse the car but I suddenly jammed my foot on the accelerator and my boyfriend and I were very astonished at this unexpected situation. 

>> When we were about to leave the place, I had to reverse the car but I suddenly jammed my foot on the accelerator. My boyfriend and I were very surprised at this unexpected situation. [Astonished means to be surprised in a positive way.]
 I heard that this situation is one of the mistakes that the beginners often make.

>> Correct
 Fortunately, at that time, no one was there so I didn\'t make the accidents happen.

>> Correct
 I felt that I must pay attention very carefully again.

>> Correct
 Driving a car is not a easy thing for me yet. Hehehe! 

>> Driving a car is not an easy thing for me yet.
 Anyway, have a great Monday and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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