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Hi, [이름]!^^
I am sorry to hear about your phone.

I hope it would still be fixed.

To tell you frankly, I am very lucky because my phone

is still alive and serves me.^^

It has been like three years now.

Thanks anyway for sharing.

I wish you luck!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 From yesterday, my mobile phone has been out of order so I am unable to turn my phone on. 

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 My mobile phone is with an all-in-one battery and I guess this battery already came to a bad end.

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 I am going to go to a service center to fix my phone today.

>> I am going to go to a service center to have my phone fixed today.

I want to buy a new one but the price of it is very expensive and it is still okay for me to use it continuously after changing a new battery if the problem of it is really related to the battery. 

>> I want to buy a new one but the price of it is very expensive and it is still okay for me to use it continuously after changing into a new battery if the problem is really related to the battery. 
 As we already knew, the phone\'s expectancy is about two years and my mobile phone has been also used for two years. 

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I think it is a kind of business gimmick so I feel a little bit unpleasant. 

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 Well, there is no way for me to do. 

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 I just have to change it to new one or fix it. ^^;;

>> I just have to change it into a new one or have it fixed.
Anyway, that is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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