Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello and Thursday morning, [이름]!^^
Congratulations for making your phone last longer!^^
I hope it won\'t have any problems anymore.
Thank you also for informing me about the relationship of having
a phone with high specs and the expense of using it. I didn\'t know about it!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I had my mobile phone fixed yesterday and the problem was really related to the all-in-one battery.
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My phone is now working well.
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I felt very frustrated with the high price of new one but now, I don\'t need to buy new one.
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I think I can use it more than a year.
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In my case, I only use it for searching news and chatting with friends so I don\'t need to have a new one with a high specification.
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If I use a new one with a high specification, I have to pay high communication expense so it is waste of money.
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I am lucky to have my mobile phone fixed and use it again.
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Anyway, you are going to leave the office soon, aren\'t you.
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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