Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
Thank you for informing me about the schedule!^^
I think you are now planning on how to spend you holiday.
But I hope you will still be able to talk to me by then.
Let\'s continue talking about this tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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These days, I am sleepy in the mornings.
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I guess it might be a spring fatigue.
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In order to get rid of it, I am drinking a cup of iced coffee.
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I know it won\'t work on me but it is better than I don\'t do anything.
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By the way, next Thursday is Childcare\'s Day so our government has decided to make next Friday an temporary holiday.
>> By the way, next Thursday is Childcare\'s Day so our government has decided to make next Friday a temporary holiday.
Because of this sudden decision, we can take 4 days holiday next week.
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The purpose that our government made this decision is to boost our economy.
>> The purpose of the decision our government made is to boost our economy.
Moreover, to gain the popularity from the citizens, our government suddenly designated it as an temporary holiday.
>> Moreover, to gain the popularity from the citizens, our government suddenly designated it as a temporary holiday.
However, many workers are still unable to take a rest on that day because this temporary holiday is not mandatory.
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It means that it depends on the discretion of the employer.
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Luckily, our boss already announced that we would have a holiday on that day.
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How about you there in Power English?
>> Correct [We will follow the holiday on Thursday.]
Have you already known about this news?
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I hope Power English will also follow our government\'s decision for all teachers there.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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