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2016-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher, It is a wonderful Friday for both of us. You are going to go to your hometown and I am feeling very free in the office. If I had a cup of iced coffee, it would be like I am walking on cloud. I've gotta go to buy it! ^^;; See you next Monday and take care of yourself during your trip. My hair is wavy so it is not manageable. I don't like my hair down. Who are you going with? You really need to find the intersection. If it is not comfy, you don't need to answer. I am always the one to compromise in troubles. My mom is like a saint. I just want to register our marriage. He doesn't like to do it because of a money matter and other complications. It is not only the reason why.

강사 첨삭

Good vibes, [이름]!^^
It\'s good to know that you have a good feeling today.^^
I hope that you will continue to have that

until you spend your weekend.

Take care also when you go to the mountains!^^

See you on Monday!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher, 

>> Correct
 It is a wonderful Friday for both of us. 

>> Correct
 You are going to go to your hometown and I am feeling very free in the office. 

>> Correct
 If I had a cup of iced coffee, it would be like I am walking on cloud. 

>> Correct
 I\'ve gotta go to buy it! ^^;;

>> Correct
 See you next Monday and take care of yourself during your trip. 

>> Correct
 My hair is wavy so it is not manageable. 

>> Correct
 I don\'t like my hair down.]

>> Correct
 Who are you going with? 

>> Correct
 You really need to find the intersection.

>> You really need to find an intersection.
 If it is not comfy, you don\'t need to answer. 

>> Correct
 I am always the one to compromise in troubles. 

>> I am always the one who compromises in troubles.
 My mom is like a saint.
>> Correct
I just want to register our marriage. 

>> Correct
 He doesn\'t like to do it because of a money matter and other complications.

>>He doesn\'t like to do it because of money matters and other complications.
 It is not only the reason why.

>> Correct

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