Composition

2016-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I guess you are preparing to leave the office now. I am sorry for submitting my composition late. By the way, I saw a movie yesterday and it was a horror movie. I don't like seeing that kind of movie but someone suggested it to me so I tried to watch it. The movie title is Triangle and it has a big twist. I know you don't also like seeing this kind of genre but if you have a chance to see it with your friend, I think you will be also interested in this movie. However, don't see it alone. It is too creepy. ^^;; Anyway, have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^
Thanks for recommending the movie but

I think I can\'t. Even if I watch it with a friend,

I think I wouldn\'t be able to sleep at night.

Maybe, you could just tell me why it is interesting

to see.

See you tomorrow~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I guess you are preparing to leave the office now. 

>> Correct
 I am sorry for submitting my composition late. 

>> Correct
 By the way, I saw a movie yesterday and it was a horror movie. 

>> Correct
 I don\'t like seeing that kind of movie but someone suggested it to me so I tried to watch it. 

>> Correct
 The movie title is Triangle and it has a big twist. 

>> Correct
 I know you don\'t also like seeing this kind of genre but if you have a chance to see it with your friend, I think you will be also interested in this movie. 

>> Correct
 However, don\'t see it alone. It is too creepy. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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