Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
Thanks for recommending the movie but
I think I can\'t. Even if I watch it with a friend,
I think I wouldn\'t be able to sleep at night.
Maybe, you could just tell me why it is interesting
to see.
See you tomorrow~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I guess you are preparing to leave the office now.
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I am sorry for submitting my composition late.
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By the way, I saw a movie yesterday and it was a horror movie.
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I don\'t like seeing that kind of movie but someone suggested it to me so I tried to watch it.
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The movie title is Triangle and it has a big twist.
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I know you don\'t also like seeing this kind of genre but if you have a chance to see it with your friend, I think you will be also interested in this movie.
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However, don\'t see it alone. It is too creepy. ^^;;
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Anyway, have a wonderful day and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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