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Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

We have discussed this very important issue that

some parts of the world is currently facing.

It may not be a big one now but without proper

education about water, we may encounter it sooner or later.

Conserve water!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 We talked about \'Water Shortage\' during our class and I have been thinking about what will happen in the future. 

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If the supply of water decreases, the price of water will be higher and then, people who are not rich can\'t afford to buy water. 

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 If this situation is getting serious, people can\'t help but drink dirty water and then, it will harm people\'s health. 

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 If this cycles are repetitive, after all, human beings will die off. 

>> If this cycle is repetivie, human beings will eventually die.
 This situation seems like a kind of science fiction. 

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 However, if we don\'t put our efforts to save water, someday, we will really face this terrible situation. 

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 I really don\'t want to imagine the world without water. 

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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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