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Dear [Name]. [Name],
I already asked Duns number to "Kim& Chang" today.
The master of "Kim& Chang" said that they need team leader's approval.
And they will request Duns number after receive their team leader's approval.
Can we wait for Duns number ?
It will takes at least one month.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Thank you.
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Dear [Name]. [Name],>> CorrectI already asked Duns number to "Kim& Chang" today.>> I already asked Dun's number from Kim and Chang today.The master of "Kim& Chang" said that they need team leader's approval.
>> "Kim & Chang's" CEO said that they need the team leader's approval.And they will request Duns number after receive their team leader's approval. >> And they will request Duns number after receiving their team leader's approval. Can we wait for Duns number? >> Can we wait for Dun's number?It will takes at least one month.>> It will take at least one month.I'm looking forward to your reply.>> CorrectThank you.
>>Correct.
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