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2011-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I already asked Duns number to "Kim& Chang" today. The master of "Kim& Chang" said that they need team leader's approval. And they will request Duns number after receive their team leader's approval. Can we wait for Duns number ? It will takes at least one month. I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

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Good morning my dear Bella! Thank you for your composition. Have a nice day! T.Cam..^^ Dear [Name]. [Name],>> CorrectI already asked Duns number to "Kim& Chang" today.>> I already asked Dun's number from Kim and Chang today.The master of "Kim& Chang" said that they need team leader's approval. >> "Kim & Chang's" CEO said that they need the team leader's approval.And they will request Duns number after receive their team leader's approval. >> And they will request Duns number after receiving their team leader's approval. Can we wait for Duns number? >> Can we wait for Dun's number?It will takes at least one month.>> It will take at least one month.I'm looking forward to your reply.>> CorrectThank you. >>Correct.

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