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2016-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! It seems like it is Friday today. I wish I could only work for 4 days a week. Hehehe! By the way, I am going to go on a mountain tomorrow. I was supposed to drive my boyfriend's car to go there but I didn't find a free parking lot. The cost of parking is a little bit high so I'd rather take a subway to go there. We are going to get up at 6 AM and get there at 7 AM. It will take us about 6 hours to go up and down. It has been a long time since we went climbing last so I feel so excited. The mountain that we are going to go has a big rock and we have to climb the rock to get to the top of the mountain. We only have to rely on a rope to climb the rock so it makes me feel thrilled. I will show you the picture next week. Have a good holiday and see you on this Friday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I am so excited to see the pictures!

However, at the latter part of your homework, you said that

you will see me on Friday.

Does it mean you are not going anywhere?

Keep safe!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 It seems like it is Friday today. 

>> Correct
 I wish I could only work for 4 days a week. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 By the way, I am going to go on a mountain tomorrow.

>> Correct
 I was supposed to drive my boyfriend\'s car to go there but I didn\'t find a free parking lot. 

>> Correct
 The cost of parking is a little bit high so I\'d rather take a subway to go there.

>> Correct
 We are going to get up at 6 AM and get there at 7 AM. 

>> Correct
 It will take us about 6 hours to go up and down.

>> Correct
 It has been a long time since we went climbing last so I feel so excited. 

>> It has been a long time since we last went climbing so I feel so excited.
 The mountain that we are going to go has a big rock and we have to climb the rock to get to the top of the mountain. 

>> The mountain that we are going to go to has a big rock and we have to climb the rock to get to the top of the mountain.
 We only have to rely on a rope to climb the rock so it makes me feel thrilled.

>> Correct
 I will show you the picture next week.

>> Correct
 Have a good holiday and see you on this Friday! ^^**

>> Have a good holiday and see you this Friday!

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