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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
The master of "Kim & Chang" call a back to me a few miniute ago.
She said that unfortunately, they can't received team leader's approval to create Duns number.
Because They never didn't know about Duns number and They didn't want enter the detail in to a website about their information by problem internal security.
There are to many company that reluctant about open their company information in Korea.
And "Kim & Chang " didn't even use internet banking service by problem internal security.
She said that when they send money always, they have to go to bank.
So I think it is impossible to create Duns number.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name]. [Name],The master of "Kim & Chang" call a back to me a few miniute ago.>>Kim and Chang's CEO called me a while ago.She said that unfortunately, they can't received team leader's approval to create Duns number.>>She told me that she couldnt receive team leader's approval to create Duns number.Because They never didn't know about Duns number and They didn't want enter the detail in to a website about their information by problem internal security.>>It is so because they didnt know Duns number and they didnt want to enter the details about the information by problem internal security on the website.There are to many company that reluctant about open their company information in Korea.>>There are many companies in Korea that are reluctant toopen their information.And "Kim & Chang " didn't even use internet banking service by problem internal security.>>correct!She said that when they send money always, they have to go to bank.>>She said that whenever they need to send money, they must go to the bank.So I think it is impossible to create Duns number.>>correct!Thank you.
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