Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Now I can say that you really had a very busy schedule!^^
Thank you for sharing anyway!^^ I was very happy to know
your activities last time.
If you can\'t endure the pain, try to take a pain killer.
It will help you a lot!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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During my holiday, I abused my body. Hehehe!
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On the first day, I went climbing.
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There were a lot of big rocks so these made me feel scared and thrilled when I climb them.
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On the second day, I went to an indoor rock climbing gym because of the rainy weather.
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After doing it, I had a heavy muscle pain in my back and arms for 3 days.
>> After doing it, I had a terrible back pain and muscle pain in arms for 3 days.
On the third day, I went to the river side to ride a bicycle.
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To remove my muscle pain, I thought that I\'d rather exercise than do nothing.
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On the last day, I went to mountain again.
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It was very sunny so I was able to see the beautiful view of the city from the top.
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After going back home, I had to clean my room even though I was very exhausted.
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Because of my busy schedule during my holiday, I was unable to take care of my place so it was very dirty.^^;;
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Now, I somehow have a Monday sickness.
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I wish I could work only for 4 days a week. Hehehe!
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Anyway, I am sorry for being absent last Friday. ^^;;
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See you tomorrow!
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